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she crawls across a midnight floor
as he beckons  in the silence
upon her back or knee's to serve
his need of blood thru violence
Time retreats and reconfigures
in the thick dread of  needing
his call for blood is answered thus
on knee's scratched and bleeding
her throat a curve of soft delight
a fountain upon which to feed
she offers trust and he promises life
and carefully controls his need
In delicate sips he drinks  her in
her blood warm and sweet
he is falling in love and feels alive
and his heart begins to beat
:iconfairyrainsong:

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i think this needs work, it doesnt flow quite right

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:iconalapip:
Rain,

yes, well written,
but too primal for me.
who does "he" represent?

pip

--
when a man refers to the woman,
[who chose him], as his better half,
for once, he tells the truth. - llp - nov'09
:iconfairyrainsong:
he is a vampire of course. For me, the finest looking vamp on the block will always be gary oldham in bram stokers dracula.

--
"There are FOUR lights!"

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